Finally free

Hellllloooos 

How are you guys

Hope keeping well in Corona Kaal, Wish you a very happy good evening and lot of good health. Today I tried to write a song which is not only on composition of "Finally free" from Julie and the Phantoms but also inspired as well

Do let me know how do like it. All critics are most welcome to share their views, don't feel sad and don't hesitate, your feedback is my strength



Hearts on Fire

Lots of desire

So we do sing what we aspire


I am broken

Ready for re-creation

So pl do sing why is satire

 

Don’t know if you will get it

Cause you are still so far

Don’t know if you will make it

Cause you feel you’re apart

 

It’s my sky

Let’s Join hands

Close all ends

 

I’ll remain with you

Come close with dew

Whether, All is fine

Come say, you are mine

Now for this life

Hope we won’t apart

Waited so long and now we’re finally free

 

We’re happy now

Nothing get withdrawn

Hoping we will celebrate

 

Why to rest in peace

With love make it ease

Cause we now, we can live in peace

 

We know we will get it

Cause you are not that far

We know we will make it

Cause you are now my part

 

It’s my sky

Let’s Join hands

Close all ends

 

I’ll remain with you

Come closure with dew

Whether, All is fine

Come say, you are mine

Now for this life

Hope we won’t apart

Waited so long and now we’re finally free

 

Whoa-oa-oa-oa

 

It’s my sky

It’s my sky

 

Let’s Join hands

Let’s Join hands

 

Close all ends

Close all ends

 

Waited so long and now we’re finally free


Whoa-oa-oa

Oh, oh-oh

Whoa-oa-oa

Finally free, Yeah

 

Whoa-oa-oa

Oh

Waited so long and now we’re finally free

Finally free 

Yeah



Shyamili



Comments

  1. Anindya Baksi19 September 2020 at 18:22

    Well versed. Some paraphrases could have been versed otherwise to make a clear meaning.. would have loved to make a tune of this..
    Well done ...keep it up.

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  2. Unknown19 September 2020 at 18:47

    Very well composed lyrics
    But madam little little not getting truly speaking, but I really appreciate your work and you are really all rounder madam.
    Well done ✅ keep going madam

    @vikram

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  3. Unknown19 September 2020 at 18:50

    Very well tried mam, keep it up..👍👍

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  4. Prem khurana19 September 2020 at 19:36

    Very well 👍👍👍

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  5. Raj kumar singh19 September 2020 at 20:10

    Well done madam.

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  6. Pawan Agrawal20 September 2020 at 11:34

    🙏

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  7. Amit21 September 2020 at 00:01

    All I can say is -

    Thank you so much for all you do;
    You're truly a delight;
    Whenever our life overwhelms and drives us in,
    Your poetry makes everything all right!!!
    Bravo to Shyamili

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  8. SKS22 September 2020 at 12:45

    Have a great free fly. Commendable words..

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